Practice certainly does make perfect. In this pitch I felt more comfortable and spoke more naturally and avoided rushing my speech. I feel like the gist of my message was delivered effectively and might catch the interest of anyone who would like to jump in and join the MNFC.
All of my previous feedback was encouraging but not critical so I did not have anything to change based on those comments.
Thanks for the comments and helpful suggestions. What are some things that you would want to learn about if you came to a class?
Cheers.
Hi Anthony,
ReplyDeleteI think the pacing of my elevator pitch was also difficult to get in the beginning. You can’t rush saying all the information because then your customers won’t remember anything. It is all about finding that balance. Eventually, I noticed that I started to memorize the elevator pitch, and that’s what helped it become more natural. I wonder if the same thing happened to you.
Hello Anthony,
ReplyDeleteOnce again I think you did a great job. I think your pace was great, as it felt like a natural conversation and not like someone trying to bombard me with their business idea. I also liked having the sound of the stream in the background as it added value to what you were trying to sell as your business idea.